CloakRoom: Chapter 12
Chptr12:RitaHidesInDaBackOfAParkedJeep.
SoonItStartsMoving&ShePeeps2CDatDaDriver
IzInUni4m&DeyROnDaHighway2Surat.
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SoonItStartsMoving&ShePeeps2CDatDaDriver
IzInUni4m&DeyROnDaHighway2Surat.
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Why:
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posted by 3825media at 12:39 AM
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since its turning out to be so filmi..
what next?
The navy cadet finds her in the back of the jeep.
Their eyes meet and they fall in love.
But she is too young and then he is arrested for paedophilia.
Maybe the Navy Guy had seen her as she was escaping and they recognise each other. She offers to sleep with him for a safe exit to Surat
Rita covers herself with the tarpaulin and lies inside again. Suddenly the jeep stops, and the tarpaulin is lifted. She is scared out of her wits, when she sees herself surrounded by a group of evil looking bearded men, tall and powerful in shalwar kurtas brandishing weapons and with bushy beards.
Why are you guys putting Rita in trouble? That's the author's job, no? As it is, things are difficult and you have to save her!
the driver could be the navy cadet who has been following her from VT, came to the brothel woman to rescue her but did not find her there.
he must now be thanking his stars that he found her.
may be prof zaidi was working on some advance economics with 'defence' implications
People, please realise that Cadet guy has NOT SEEN her. The cadet guy stops at some dhaba place to go to the loo, and Rita sees the same people on the train who carrie the coffin... she gets out of the jeep to follow those guys, and know what happend to her da...
Wilde, what makes you so sure he hasn't seen her. He could have, while going out or just as she was escaping and he was coming in! Besides its fiction... and with too many people writing you never know who comes up with a reverse justification somewhere in chapter 27!
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Listen up CloakRoomers!
Okay, this is a tough situation for me now. Some of you have finally managed to "look forward" into the original story that I'd written, so let me say this:
Until now I was firmly in control, but now things are getting out of hand. From this point onwards, you guys are in the driving seat. My choices will be based on who strategically displaced my gameplan. In this case it happens to be Vikas Garg.
I will give out some BlowKizz and ButtKizz, now and then, to players who perform well. This is going to be added up later, so don't take it lightly.Also, you can find your score after a few days by simply searching for blowkizz or buttkixx on Google.
The most important and difficult thing is, of course, winning the entire move. Congratulations, Vikas!
We are going to make up the rules collectively as we play along, so leave your comments regarding that if you like. Or email me directly at 3825media@gmail.com
Bring it on!
- RoGue
PS: Kathak and Wilde get one BlowKiss each. Scribbleamus and Pranay get a nice solid, ButtKixx, one each.
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